Saturday, January 24, 2009

Looking for a Clue?

The light blue sky is just over me
The crimson sun just shines over me
I could see both, but.......
I could not feel any........
coz i've emptied my thoughts
merely to fill my mind with fresh and novel thoughts
Again I see a little bird,
with shivering feathers
poor little thing,
It's flapping its wings bitterly
not knowing that
it has broken one of it...............!

3 comments:

Anjala said...

Nice poem sis Plz make some effort to write ur poem in a nice background pic N It may add some additional value to ur words :)

Anjala said...

Nice poem sis Plz make some effort to write ur poem in a nice background pic N It may add some additional value to ur words :)

Naදී said...

Thanx a lot. I admire ur comment. I sure will fix it.